I like your repeat pattern, but you should get rid of the white lines in between the octagons. Also, I think if you added something else it would look better, its pretty simple right now. Your radial pattern is amazing! I love how it looks like a flower in bloom. Good job!
The patterns for both are interesting but on your motif, there is too much white space around the pattern. To make it better, you could make the shape bigger and fill in the space. Also, on the first pattern I can see little white lines between some of the shapes. other than those two problems your work looks really well made!
I like your repeat pattern, but you should get rid of the white lines in between the octagons. Also, I think if you added something else it would look better, its pretty simple right now. Your radial pattern is amazing! I love how it looks like a flower in bloom. Good job!
ReplyDeleteThe patterns for both are interesting but on your motif, there is too much white space around the pattern. To make it better, you could make the shape bigger and fill in the space. Also, on the first pattern I can see little white lines between some of the shapes. other than those two problems your work looks really well made!
ReplyDeleteI love your motif! It appears very well thought out and is really creative, but it should go all the way out.
ReplyDeleteI love your motif! It appears very well thought out and is really creative, but it should go all the way out.
ReplyDeleteI love your motif! It appears very well thought out and is really creative, but it should go all the way out.
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